my opinion for online-game

Today, there are many kind’s of online-games in the world. Some people argue the online-games are good for humans or bad for humans. But in my opinion, the online-games effects are depend on people themselves. For example, I play online-games is consider to a way to relax. I will control myself to conquer the addiction. So, if the people have a good controllable ability, play online-games are a good way to relax. Also, we can learn much new knowledge from online-games. For example, I understand some Japanese because I play the online-games, even I don’t know how to pronounce the world.
On the other hand, if the people haven’t a good controllable ability, they will get into trouble when they play online-games. First, they get addict to play online-games. Then, they spend more time and more money on online-games. For example, if the students spend more time on online-games, their studies will go down and slowly to lost the energy to study.

research paper?

research paper?!
finished!

This is my first time to do the research paper, so i don't have any idea about that.
After the research paper finished, I learn a lot. The hander one for me is how to wirte the good reference. I have to write it very carefully. Also, when I find the information, I don't wirte down where is the information from. So, after i finished the paper, I had to check it again. I advance when we write the research paper, we need to write down where is the information from so that will help us to write the good reference. Next, in the research paper, we have to wirte a lot of words, so we have to check the mistakes each time that we finished.